Talk:Time Has Come Today (Grey's Anatomy)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: M.Mario (talk · contribs) 16:27, 5 July 2012 (UTC)

Disambigs, Refs & External
 * Please fix the disambigs.
 * Could you name the disambiguation links? Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 10:44, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ - Ive done it for you. — M.Mario  (T/C) 10:53, 8 July 2012 (UTC)


 * IMDB is an unreliable source, and should be deleted unless I will have to fail the article. Make sure you replace with another reference.
 * Please link Works and Publishers on all refs
 * Reference 10- References should not be in capital letters.
 * There are no external links? Such as the Greys Anatomy template, this needs fixing!

Infobox
 * Again, the music needs to be in the article.
 * Link characters of Olivia Harper, etc.

Lead
 * storylines is one word - fix throughout article.
 * Missing a ) after Ellen Pompeo.
 * Take California out of brakets, just put Los Angeles, California.
 * "Loretta Devine (Adele Webber) reprised her role as a guest star, in addition to Chris O'Donnell (Finn Dandridge), Kate Burton (Dr. Ellis Grey) and Sarah Utterback (Olivia Harper)" -> In the first paragraph and most episodes it goes character then actor in brackets, however you swap them round. Put; the characters of Adele Webber (Loretta Devine)....
 * "The title of the episode refers to the song, "Time Has Come Today", by the soul music band, The Chambers Brothers" -> Source?
 * "Running for 45 minutes and 38 seconds" -> Not needed in Lead.

Plot
 * "requesting a choice between his career as a surgeon and his marriage to her" -> giving him a choice between his career or his marriage.
 * "Dr. Preston Burke (Isaiah Washington) faces the aftermath of the shooting" -> Dr. Preston Burke (Isaiah Washington) faces the aftermath of being shot, past tense.
 * "An infant with a severe heart condition is admitted in neonatology, and is revealed to have been abandoned in a schoolyard by his biological mother, whose identity lies between four pre-adolescents" -> Boy's name and actor. Maybe explain "four pre-adolescents".
 * ❌ The boy was admitted in neonatology, therefore, he was a newborn. He was not credited, as many baby actors on television. Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 10:10, 8 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Link quaritine to appropriate article.
 * Link "plague".
 * "and ultimately dies in Dr. Miranda Bailey (Chandra Wilson)'s guilt" -> and ultimately dies in Dr. Miranda Bailey (Chandra Wilson)'s care
 * "to the guilt over the death of both Toussant and Duquette." -> to the guilt over the death of both Toussant and Duquette, whom she also operated on.

Production
 * Image: Put full name and Link. Also, put (pictured).
 * Link "second season".
 * "which is the headquarters building for the media company Fisher Communications and Fisher's ABC affiliated Komo radio and television stations for Seattle" -> Needs to be cut down, "media company" is not needed. Also, you need to mention that the series is set in Seatle.
 * Im not sure whether the location information is neccesary to the artice, more to the main Grey's Anatomy article.
 * ❌ I think it is helpful information to the reader, in order to contrast the fictional setting and the filming setting.


 * Change "taped" to "filmed".
 * Unlink second mention of second season.
 * "Because Denny died, and Burke got shot and Meredith lost her panties.", stated Rhimes" -> Removed.
 * Put surname of actors in brackets.
 * who you are referring to.


 * "the prominence Grey's underwear has in the first episode of the season" - the prominence which Grey's underwear has in the first episode of the season...

Reception
 * Reception: Nielsen -> Nielsen ratings
 * "Meredith Grey, whose story line received negative critiques" -> Meredith not needed.
 * Remember to put actor names in brackets.
 * (again) who you are referring to.

For the crosses, what I mean is: Izzie (Heigl), Meredith (Pompeo), like that. Good work! — M.Mario  (T/C) 10:26, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * But am I not supposed do to that only twice for each character? Once in the lead and once in the article. Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 10:44, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Well as a reader, by the time I had got to Reception, I had forgot who played who, however, it is not neccesary, nor part of the criteria. Once you have finished the points you still say you are fixing, then I will pass. — M.Mario  (T/C) 10:50, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ All issues have been addressed. Thank  you so much for your thorough review! Jonathan Harold Koszeghi (talk) 11:16, 8 July 2012 (UTC)