Talk:Timeline of Francis Drake's circumnavigation

Cold War revert
This regards the revert I made on the Cold War edit. Before the reverted edit, the article did not read Cold War (Cold War). It read cold war. This (cold war) is cited material written by the author Adolph S. Oko Jr.  Most kind regards to all.Hu Nhu (talk) 02:05, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

28 January 2022 edits by 97.120.93.30
Hello 97.120.93.30. Please know that I undid your edits as they are not supported by any of the citations in the article. Also, the existing information you did alter was properly cited. Additionally, the information you inserted is a Fringe theory and there is an entirely proper article which you could edit: Fringe theories on the location of New Albion. It certainly does need attention, and this may be an article for you to consider. I see that you are an ip address editor with only one edit. Should you like assistance in editing, I am glad to help you where I can and direct you to the right people when I am unable to assist. Do please look at the Fringe theories on the location of New Albion because it really does need editing. Most kind regards,Hu Nhu (talk) 16:20, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The Oregon Dunes landfall site is recognized by Oregon State Parks and the Oregon Historical Society. They even put up a plaque to that effect.  The two Oregon organizations also recognize that Drake sailed south to spend five weeks in California.  The Drakes Bay landing site is recognized by the National Park Service (National Historic Landmark) and by the state of California (California Historical Landmark #1061).  Anonymous edits to support one of the fringe theories really do not help Wikipedia or the public.  The edits should be reverted.MikeVdP (talk) 00:28, 1 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello again 97.120.93.30. It has been several days since I first elicited conversation here and I am posting again toward that end. Please know that your edits, which I certainly do view as good faith WP:GF, are moving toward disruptive editing WP:DE. You have a single-purpose account, and I encourage you to read WP:SPA.  Whale Cove is an interesting idea, one of many alternatives offered regarding the area near Drakes Bay as Francis Drake's encampment and New Albion claim.


 * Nevertheless, this article is not the forum to discuss the various sites. It is the place to record the prevailing scholarship.  Wikipedia does have an article which address other ideas.


 * What follows is the prevailing scholarship upon which I am relying. And as I go through the authors, I see that it is an international group of researchers.  Von der Porten and Morison from the US, Turner and Cassels from the UK, and Gough from Canada.  That is widespread scholarship.


 * Cape Arago— Here are citations regarding Cape Arago which one may find in use on the New Albion page. I do not use them all on this page because it might be WP:CITEKILL. Please note that Morison is a two time Pulitzer Prize winning historian.


 * Von der Porten, Edward (January 1975). "Drake's First Landfall". Pacific Discovery, California Academy of Sciences. Page 28.


 * Morison, Samuel Eliot (1978). The Great Explorere: The European Discovery of America. New York: Oxford University Press, Inc. Page 700. ISBN 978-0195042221.


 * Cassels, Sir Simon (August 2003). "Where Did Drake Careen The Golden Hind in June/July 1579? A Mariner's Assessment". The Mariner's Mirror. 89 (1). Page 263.


 * Gough, Barry (1992). The Northwest Coast: British Navigation, Trade and Discoveries to 1812. Vancouver: U Univ. of British Columbia Press. Page 14. ISBN 978-0774803991.


 * Turner, Michael (2006). In Drake's Wake Volume 2 The World Voyage. United Kingdom: Paul Mould Publishing. Page 163. ISBN 978-1-904959-28-1.


 * Furthermore, both the Oregon State Parks and Oregon Historical Society support that Drake anchored at Cape Arago and proceeded to sail south to seek a suitable careenage site for Golden Hind. Here is the citation for that.  It too is in use on the New Albion page.


 * "Sir Francis Drake 1540-1596 Circumnavigator and And Admiral". The Historical Marker Data Base. 2021. Archived from the original on 1 November 2021. Retrieved 23 October 2021.


 * New Albion— Additionally, one may see the various forms of official recognition which identifies the area near Drakes Bay as Francis Drake's encampment and New Albion claim. Typically, official recognition does not occur without a process of much investigation and independent verification. I have links to the National Historic Landmark process which you can review here as an example of this: |independent scholarly review and |rigor and open process.  Again, this is a diverse collection--Federal, two California entities, and two federally recognized tribes.


 * United States Department of the Interior
 * California State Parks
 * California Office of Historic Preservation
 * Federated Indians of Graton Rancheria
 * Coast Miwok Tribal Council of Marin


 * You may view details with appropriate citations |HERE.


 * Whale Cove as a site is definitely an interesting alternative view, and it is one of many just like it. The very recent 2021 book by Laurence Bergreen puts Drake in San Francisco Bay.  And Henry Raup Wagner put Drake at Trinidad Bay.  Harry Kelsey, Huntington Library Research Scholar, puts Drake in Baja, and Sam Bawlf put Drake in British Columbia.  Numerous less noted researchers/authors have almost two dozen other ideas.  On this page, I have been writing about the New Albion site that has the prevailing weight of ongoing scholarship behind it.


 * So, please quit adding Whale Cove to this article and please do write about it on the appropriate page. That is how this encyclopedia is built. Kind regards,Hu Nhu (talk) 00:52, 10 February 2022 (UTC)

suggestion for re-wording
This is a lovely article. I enjoy reading it. There is one sentence, however, that I always stumble over: "From Plymouth Sound, England, Drake navigated into the Pacific and then the Atlantic, ..." It sort of skips over the first passage through the Atlantic, to get to the Pacific. How about: "From Plymouth Sound, England, Drake navigated to the south-west Atlantic, into the Pacific, and then rounded the Cape of Good Hope to return to the Atlantic,..." Just a suggestion, but I think it would read better if it didn't sound like he somehow went from Plymouth directly to the Pacific. Mr Serjeant Buzfuz (talk) 20:58, 26 February 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello Mr Serjeant Buzfuz and thank you for your kind comments regarding the article. Please forgive this late reply.  I broke from Wikipedia editing for a while as I grew a tired of the bit of edit war you can read about in the post above yours.  I fully agree with your observation and assessment.  I believe it has been corrected.  If not, please do so as your suggestion is excellent.  Kind regards, Hu Nhu (talk) 18:00, 8 January 2023 (UTC)

Mocha Island
I have often seen quotes regarding the Mocha Island incident, but had not been able to find the original source. Wagner, Morison, Mitchell and others don't give a good source for this.

I have found it in Francis Fletcher's account of the first part of the voyage known as the Sloane MS No. 61. I have added the reference and url. This manuscript appears to be a record made by Francis Fletcher from memory, not from on-hand records. Fletcher was known to be antagonistic to Drake, so this text did not make it into The World Encompassed or Hakluyt. The original transcriber seems to be Joseph (sometimes reported as John) Conyers in 1677.MikeVdP (talk) 19:10, 7 January 2023 (UTC)

Should this be further updated to be more explicit with the executions and cannibalism directly in the text? (The Carder report in Purchas confirms extensive South American Indian cannibalism.)MikeVdP (talk) 08:30, 7 January 2023 (UTC)

The current text reads, "While suspecting aggressiveness from the people due to their history of hostile encounters with Spaniards, Drake underestimates their hostililty when he returns the next day with 10 men for water." Might updated language be more accurate: "While the aggressiveness of  Native Peoples in prior encounters with Spaniards suggests caution, the first day's transactions gets Drake's guard down.  He returns the next day with 10 men for water."?MikeVdP (talk) 19:15, 7 January 2023 (UTC)MikeVdP (talk) 19:16, 7 January 2023 (UTC)


 * The wording you suggest is accurate and makes much sense. Thank you for your attention to this article. Hu Nhu (talk) 18:02, 8 January 2023 (UTC)