Talk:Timeshare/Archives/2014

Edit request on 23 April 2013
typos38.70.0.171 (talk) 19:35, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

38.70.0.171 (talk) 19:35, 23 April 2013 (UTC)


 * As stated above, you can't just put "typos" here, and expect them to get fixed. My suggestion is for you to "copy and paste" the typos you found below, and myself or another editor will be happy to correct them. Pocketthis (talk) 20:19, 23 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please be more specific about what needs to be changed. &mdash; KuyaBriBri Talk 20:28, 23 April 2013 (UTC)

This article has copied or been copied.
The whole section on "Industry" is ripped on this site,. And the intro to this article is almost verbatum. In fact, all it needs to be complete is, "Unfortunately, not everyone is tickled pink with their Timeshare property purchases. ..." I'm not sure which way the copying is going but I'd thought I'd let you know... 74.74.236.22 (talk) 02:15, 15 May 2014 (UTC)

As far as the rest of the article, I have rewritten almost the entire article, and added new sections like "The Tour". This article is honest and reflects the problems and hardships buyers can inherit with ownership, as well as balancing the information for those whom do find the concept useful. There is "always" room for improvement in any article. If you feel you have something to add, let us know.-Thanks-Pocketthis (talk) 17:06, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
 * Easy fix. I eliminated the Industry section completely. It was just sales fluff anyway. However, the little one paragraph intro is not favorable, nor unfavorable to the industry and is just explaining what the concept is. That stays.