Talk:Timothée Chalamet/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FormalDude (talk · contribs) 07:48, 9 January 2022 (UTC)

I will post updates here as I complete the review. Please allow up to seven days for the review to be completed. –– FormalDude  talk  07:48, 9 January 2022 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Using too many quotations is incompatible with the encyclopedic writing style, and they currently dominate large sections of the article. Please see WP:OVERQUOTING. Resolve by removing quotes, shortening quotes to only the most applicable and pertinent parts, or by paraphrasing quote where possible.
 * I never noticed it before but you're right, there are currently way too many full quotes. I've started working on revising. Trillfendi (talk) 20:11, 10 January 2022 (UTC)


 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * Fails copyright check for use of quotes that are too long, per WP:COPYQUOTE. Extensive quotation of copyrighted text is prohibited. The following quotes specifically are problematic:
 * Stephen Farber of The Hollywood Reporter
 * Villeneuve
 * Lewis Knight of Daily Mirror
 * Please resolve by removing, shortening, or paraphrasing.


 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Needs a Personal life section detailing relationships, charity, and possibly hobbies.
 * I think there used to be a personal life section but a couple of years ago people kept abusing it. I will write a new one. Trillfendi (talk) 19:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)


 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Good use of available images.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: ✅
 * Article has been fixed to address any issues.
 * Pass/Fail: ✅
 * Article has been fixed to address any issues.

Comments

 * Unsourced: "On his mother's side, he is a nephew of husband-and-wife filmmakers and producers Amy Lippman and Rodman Flender."
 * ✅ the most available source I could find was Us Weekly. Trillfendi (talk) 19:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)


 * I added back a personal life section and fixed the quote/copyvio situations. Anything else? Trillfendi (talk) 22:07, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
 * That's all, good job! –– FormalDude  talk  22:12, 13 January 2022 (UTC)