Talk:Timothy Olyphant/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:21, 24 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:21, 24 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * A few dead links
 * No dablinks or copyvio issues
 * Fairly well-written article. Good job!
 * Can you add a few more images, not necessarily Olyphant's.
 * A few instances of overciting at some places. If you want to cite sources as examples, say here ...has participated in many pro-celebrity tournaments or he and the show were often perceived to have been "snubbed" by Emmy voters, I have no issues with that, but to support a single fact like but has said he does not consider him a "good guy" you can do with three refs.


 * Lead
 * For an article of this length the lead should be at least 3 paras long


 * Early life
 * I think articles (after lead) typically begin with the person's full name
 * I see some overciting at the end of the part and Katherine (née Gideon) Three refs should suffice. Also after the first quotation in the last para
 * both remarried May look a bit too sudden after the mention of their divorce, when exactly did they reunite?
 * The second para seems part of personal life, not early life.
 * but was told By whom?


 * 1995–2003
 * Sure Olyphant didn't receive negative reviews on his debut?
 * but he did not have an opportunity to meet the show's producer, Clint Eastwood, who quit days before filming began Not sure if this is relevant here


 * 2004–2009
 * Good, but look at "general" comments


 * 2010–2015
 * There, he encounters many outlaw figures from his childhood, including his father and Boyd Crowder, with whom he dug coal as a teenager Maybe we are getting too much into the character? I would say a line merely introducing the character should suffice.
 * Raylan Givens has been described by many television critics You can simply call him "Givens" once you have introduced him. Please check for other instances I may have missed.
 * Justified was awarded a Peabody Award in 2011 Italics for "Justified"


 * 2015–present
 * Good, but look at "general" comments


 * Personal life
 * delivering his reports in an unconventional style What exactly was this style?
 * Olyphant is a keen tennis player Sure the wording "keen" comes from the sources 242 and 243 (the sources immediately after the part)? I am unable to access the websites but I need to be sure.


 * Filmography
 * Is each entry in the tables sourced? (also in Awards and nominations)

Returning with more tomorrow. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 18:04, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much for agreeing to review this. I'll make all the changes in a couple of days; things are very busy right now.Popeye191 (talk) 08:57, 26 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Sure, I am busy as well. But I'll complete the review tonight. Great job with this article! Cheers, Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 12:37, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

I have finished posting my comments. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:45, 28 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I'll fix it up over the weekend Popeye191 (talk) 18:32, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

A week has passed without activity here. If there is no response in the next two days I'll be forced to fail this. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:46, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Failed due to inactivity. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 09:15, 10 July 2016 (UTC)