Talk:Timothy S. Healy/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 09:11, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 09:11, 1 March 2021 (UTC) 

Early Life

 * After the company's collapse during the Great Depression of 1929, he took on various jobs This is a poor closure of this section and does not identify who is being spoken about. Closure of this section should be about Timothy Healy, not his father.
 * Rephrased the sentence.  Ergo Sum  02:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Georgetown University

 * The other two candidates for the position considered by the search committee were the president of Fairfield University, Thomas R. Fitzgerald, and the former Jesuit provincial superior for New York, Robert A. Mitchell this might be considered irrelevant?
 * It probably is. I've removed it.  Ergo Sum  02:19, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Final

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

#::        --Whiteguru (talk) 00:27, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Well written article of a rather ambitious Jesuit leader. Kindly attend to matters listed above;.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Well written article of a rather ambitious Jesuit leader. Kindly attend to matters listed above;.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Well written article of a rather ambitious Jesuit leader. Kindly attend to matters listed above;.
 * Thank you for your review, .  Ergo Sum  02:20, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I thank you kindly for your edits. --Whiteguru (talk) 02:38, 2 March 2021 (UTC)