Talk:Tinkaton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 02:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Lead


 * 1) Inconsistent description of hair with the body of the article; calls them pigtails in the lead, but ponytails in the body. Also, does it have either? To me, it seems like she just let her hair down.
 * 2) Should be fixed.
 * 3) Inconsistent pronoun use; uses they/them/their/theirs at some points, she/her/hers at others, and it/its at others
 * 4) Fixed. I did leave the one instance of her in regards to Unite's commentary, as it's a singular Tinkaton. Can't do anything about the other quotes that use she or its sadly.

Infobox

Appearances
 * 1) Not related, but god it'd be neat if there was a way to say "Pokemon species" instead of character so we could remove a field.
 * 2) Yeah that may be worthwhile to bring up to the infobox page, had something else I wanted to mention there.


 * 1) Is the description of "toddler" mentioned in RS or primary sources?
 * 2) Removed it.
 * 3) Taxi shouldn't be in quotes, as it's an understandable word and accurately depicts a taxi service
 * 4) Fixed

Reception

Images
 * 1) Is there no commentary to do with the mismatch between Corviknight and Tinkaton in gameplay?
 * 2) Sadly the only discussions about their matchup were in GameRant and Screenrant


 * 1) All good.

Sources

Still need to do this.
 * All good. :v - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 03:09, 2 August 2023 (UTC)