Talk:Titan (moon)/GA1

GA on hold
This is on hold for 7 days. Please fix the following: --Rlevse 12:49, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
 * 1) Lead is not a summary of the article, please expand some. It's a bit more of a collection of facts at the moment, make it more of a summary.
 * 2) Retrieved dates on refs are highly inconsistent. Make them the same and wikilink them: January 7, 2007. Look over other ref formatting for consistency
 * 3) Placement of footnote numbers is very inconsistent. Fix them so they are like what is currently footnote 7 in "Physical characteristics" -"system after Ganymede(7).
 * 4) Don't link solo years. Unlink things like 1650. It is okay to link decades, like 2000s.
 * 5) The section "Titan in fiction" is one sentence. Expand it or merge it into the main text.
 * 6) Visibility from Earth is only two lines. Can it be expanded?
 * I've worked on the refs/footnotes to hopefully make them more consistent and always after punctuation. I'm not the best person to tackle the other issues though I fear. I expanded "Titan in fiction", but only in a minor way. Cheers SeanMack 15:44, 7 January 2007 (UTC)
 * I moved the "Visibility from Earth" info to the top of Surface features. It makes more sense here anyway. SeanMack 05:32, 13 January 2007 (UTC)


 * While the lead still needs work, it's improved good enough that I'm passing it. Nice work.Rlevse 12:29, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
 * The introduction part talks about 8 asteroids but lists only 7 (Vesta, Pallas, Iris, Ceres, Hebe, Juno, Melpomene). [unregistered user]