Talk:Titan Quest: Immortal Throne/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)

I'll do this one. I expect to get it done within a day or two.--IDVtalk 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead/infobox

 * Intervals for the publishers should use – rather than -.
 * While fine to list in prose under a "release" heading, in the infobox we generally only list release dates for major English-speaking regions+region of the developer/publisher, so the Japanese release date should probably be removed.

Gameplay

 * You should write NPCs as "non-playable characters" on the first mention.
 * I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it be "the player character attacks enemies highlighted with the mouse"? To me, "by the mouse" makes it sound like the mouse has a will of its own and isn't controlled by the player.
 * The main addition is a new Mastery titled Dream Mastery: available to new players, - sorry, what do you mean by "available to new players"?
 * The image is hard to read - I only see a brown field with colorful splodges on it. Could you perhaps specify what I'm looking at? If the player is shown (I can't tell - I haven't played the game), you could mention their location on screen, etc.

Plot

 * , is launching an attack on the living world now the more powerful Olympians - should be "now that the more powerful Olympians"

Development and release

 * Write out intellectual property in full and link it

Reception

 * There is a discussion about Steam Spy at the VG project's talk page about sources, and it seems like Steam Spy creates estimates, which may not necessarily be accurate. If a reliable source reports on the numbers, you can use that, but not Steam Spy itself.

Comments
This article is pretty good, and just needs some minor fixes. I'm placing this for a week; if everything is done by then, I'll pass the article.--IDVtalk 13:15, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I've done my best to address the issues raised. --ProtoDrake (talk) 13:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, that was quick! Congratulations, Titan Quest: Immortal Throne is now a Good Article.--IDVtalk 14:36, 19 June 2016 (UTC)