Talk:Title (song)/GA3

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 14:43, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * and debut major-label studio album → you really don't need "major label" here
 * Kevin Kadish produced the song → replace "the song" with "the track" to avoid word repetition
 * The ska influences aren't mentioned or cited in the article, so remove this assertion
 * Its lyrics delve on the singer demanding her love interest → In its lyrics, the singer demands her love interest
 * In 2015, Trainor released a music video → You should mention the exact release date here
 * The video for "Title" was released via the special edition of its parent album → Too much info for the lead, instead shortly describe what the singer does in the video
 * in both the countries → remove "the"

Background and composition

 * "Title" was written by Trainor and Kadish → write both names out here and link the latter
 * Link the album credits after "the latter"
 * Trainor felt that "Title" → replace "Title" with "the song" so that we avoid the repetition of words
 * and said that she loved that it showed a little → you could replace this with "particularly noting a"
 * whereas David Baron played piano and organ on the song → you don't need "the song" here; link the album credits afterwards
 * a duration of 2 minutes and 54 seconds (2:54) → The "(2:54)" is superfluous
 * Link the album credits after the length
 * morphed into a programmed beat. It contains → morphed into a programmed beat, further containing
 * The rap verse in "Title" was compared → you don't need "in 'Title' here"
 * of MTV News wrote that the song serves → replace "the song" with "Title" to avoid the repetition of words
 * L.V. Anderson from Slate called "Title" the → replace "Title" with "it" here for the same reason as above

Music video and promotion

 * Link Los Angeles
 * It was directed by Anthony Phan. Its premise follows a theme → Directed by Anthony Phan, its premise follows a theme
 * wearing a black coloured coat → wearing a black-coloured coat
 * in a pastel-coloured gown and lime fur. Trainor presents → in a pastel-coloured gown and lime fur, and later presents
 * interspersed with Trainor and the newly crowned → interspersed with her and the newly crowned
 * Trainor performed "Title" → Introduce this topic with "For fruther promotion, ..."

Copy-violation

 * 14.5% is a very good percentage

Outcome
– Need a few more changes to be a GA. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 05:54, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Done, great review! The only change I didn't make is removing "major-label" because believe it or not, this is a super controversial topic that has been discussed time and again on Talk:Title (Meghan Trainor album) and Talk:Meghan Trainor discography and people settled on calling it her debut "major-label" studio album. Regards.-- N Ø  06:20, 30 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Congrats for a GA! Greetings; Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:23, 30 November 2018 (UTC)