Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Thanks.


 * "is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
 * Fixed.


 * The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
 * Fixed.


 * Remove wikilink on Poland
 * Done.


 * The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
 * Fixed.

Context

 * Good
 * Noted.

Music and verse form

 * Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
 * Done.


 * Pipe Songs to Fredmans sånger on the img text
 * Already done.


 * Pipe time to Time signature
 * Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.


 * Pipe ariette to Aria
 * Done.


 * "and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
 * Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.


 * Remove "the" before musicologist
 * No, this is a normal British usage.


 * "and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
 * Done.

Lyrics

 * The writing years are not mentioned by the source
 * Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.


 * Pipe strings to String instrument
 * Done.


 * Pipe notaries to Notary
 * Done.


 * "The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
 * Done.

Reception and legacy

 * Pipe Joseph II of Austria to Joseph II, Holy Roman Emperor and polska to Polska (dance) on the img text
 * Done.


 * "calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
 * Reworded.


 * "Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
 * BA is the surname.


 * "Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
 * Ditto.


 * "how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
 * Done.


 * If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
 * Done.


 * "inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
 * Reworded.


 * Pipe freedom of expression to Freedom of speech
 * Done.


 * Wikilink flute
 * Done.


 * Wikilink cello
 * Done.


 * Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
 * Done.


 * "is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
 * Done.


 * "in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
 * Done.


 * Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
 * Done.


 * Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
 * Done.

Final comments and verdict

 * until everything is fixed; once again, you have submitted a mostly good article! --K. Peake 08:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
 * All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I added in a brief copy edit but this was totally fine elsewise before! --K. Peake 22:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)