Talk:Tkrkt/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:38, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

After your previous one passed, it is time for me to get on with this! --K. Peake 06:38, 26 July 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove afro pop and dancehall from the infobox since they are only sourced as influences
 * The all caps stylization is not sourced anywhere in the body
 * The release sentence should be the one after writing/production
 * "Lyrically, it is an" → "Lyrically, the song is an"
 * Fourth para should be four sentences, so have the first sentence begin with "Upon release,"
 * "with praise directed on its" → "Praise was directed from them towards its"
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Dubai
 * Add a new sentence mentioning the critical reception of the video

Background and release

 * "was written by Era Istrefi" → "was written by Istrefi"
 * The creation of "Nuk E Di" involvement is not sourced
 * Start a new para at the various territories release
 * Why is the release listed as several remixes including those ones when only they are sourced?

Reception

 * Merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per overly short size
 * "and Istrefi's appearance." → "and Istrefi's vocals."
 * "commended its production" → "commended the song's production"
 * Remove or replace Wolf in a Suit per WP:SELFPUB

Music video

 * Make this the second para of the newly proposed above section
 * "An accompanying music video for "Tkrkt was" → "An music video for "Tkrkt" was"
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Dubai
 * "indoor location decorated with" → "indoor location that is decorated with" to flow better with the as well as part
 * The source does not appear to mention her performing to the song when on the sofa
 * WP:OVERCITE of [4] for three sentences; out of this group, only invoke after the last one
 * "of spotting and flashing lights." → "of spotlights and flashing lights."
 * "While Music Arena Gh designated" → "A Music Arena Gh editor designated"
 * Remove or replace Wolf in a Suit per WP:SELFPUB

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed after this quick review! --K. Peake 08:06, 26 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Hi hope you're well. Sorry for the delay I'm currently on vacation with a limited access to internet though. I will continue in the next 2 days. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 15:41, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Eight days later and any updates on this? --K. Peake 06:49, 9 August 2022 (UTC)
 * You need to re-order background and composition so release comes before the comp, also how is ref 5 reliable? --K. Peake 15:21, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello, sorry again for the delayed response, I'm currently on vacation and on total holiday-mode :P. Ehm, I removed ref 5 and created a new section (tracking list), are you fine with that? Iaof2017 (talk) 17:32, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, your ways of working around the issues are definitely acceptable! --K. Peake 20:25, 14 August 2022 (UTC)