Talk:To My Daughter with Love on the Important Things in Life

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I pared down some of the advertisement words in this. The article still sounds somewhat as an advertisement (as there is no one who has provided a viewpoint with an eye towards, say, the publication of the book and the number of copies sold). By all means, I may have removed some critical meaning accidentally. My primary goal was to, as Strunk and White say, "omit needless words." The copious and redundant use of verbiage is an environment in which the line between description and adulation becomes blurry. --Lyc. cooperi (talk) 06:55, 16 November 2009 (UTC)