Talk:Toby Creek/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will get to this in a few days. Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:49, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Ensure that all the facts of the lead also find mention in the main text.
 * All of the facts that can be appropriately stated in the body are.
 * Thanks, I needed to ensure this. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:14, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * I would recommend adding notes or brief explanations for terms like Migratory Fishery Coldwater Fishery, a Warmwater Fishery and a Trout Stocking Fishery.
 * Done.


 *  It is said to show "some degraded conditions" By some specific authority?
 * By the reference.


 * not considered to be impaired Another note on "impaired waterbody" please.
 * See the Abrahams Creek GA review.


 * Pennsylvania Route 309 should be linked in the lead
 * Done.


 * I generally recommend linking in the lead as well as the main text; follow what you prefer, though.
 * There already are some?
 * I did not check it seriously, just a note. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:14, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Hydrology

 * It has been described as showing "some degraded conditions" Please add the authority that puts it so.
 * It's the reference itself.


 * The "cubic feet/second" and "milli/mcrograms per liter" measurements need convert templates.
 * Done.


 * This value was historically somewhat higher Do you have any information on why this was so?
 * I don't.


 * What do you mean by "were once measured to be"? How old are these values?
 * No, it means that it was measured one time, as opposed to multiple times.

Geography, geology, and climate

 * "Mouth should have been linked at first mention, under "Course".
 * It's already linked in the infobox.
 * I prefer a link in the main text as well, when I say first mention I do not consider the infobox... Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:30, 5 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Whyever not? --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  12:32, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Alright, we need not have the link if you don't wish to have it. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 12:45, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * So this can be passed now? --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  12:52, 11 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Can gradient be linked?
 * Done.


 * "Pressure conduit" is a redlink as of now, can you add a note explaining it?
 * Linked.


 * The "million gallons per day" need convert templates.
 * How? I'm not sure conversion templates work on words.
 * I see, it would lead to fearsome figures. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:17, 6 April 2016 (UTC)


 * Are "lake", "swamp", "pond", "reservoir", "flooding" not too common to be linked?
 * Removed one or two.


 * "cubic feet per second" measurements need to be converted
 * Done.

Biology

 *  per 100 milliliters Convert
 * Non-metric units are pretty much never used for these kinds of things.
 * I am not adamant on this, but should we not have a template here for the sake of consistency with all those we have included earlier? Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 10:26, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Meh, I guess. Just seems a little odd to me. --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  12:32, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * My suggestion may be weird but would cause no harm. Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 12:51, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * No more to say on this? Sainsf  &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 12:54, 11 April 2016 (UTC)
 * It's already been done. --Jakob (talk)  aka Jakec  13:11, 11 April 2016 (UTC)


 *  found to be the poorest habitat For aquatic life? Mention clearly.
 * In general, I would assume.


 * poor epifaunal substrate, low instream cover What do these terms mean?
 * Eipfaunal is the only unusual word, and that's linked now.


 *  The borough of Dallas has plans  As of when?
 * Who knows. Probably they still do, which would make saying "as of" inappropriate.


 * Dupicate links: Pennsylvania Route 309, forested ("Watershed")
 * Removed forested, 309 should be okay since the other links are in different sections.

That should be all. A nice article! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:32, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

You there? Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:31, 10 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the response. I believe this article is ready for promotion now. Great job! Sainsf &lt;^&gt; Feel at home 13:14, 11 April 2016 (UTC)