Talk:Today Was a Fairytale/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tb hotch Ta lk C.  02:09, 8 July 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Lead
 * '''Swift wrote had previously written the song and offered it to producers for the film's soundtrack -> This sounds very awkward.
 * Done.
 * "Today Was a Fairytale" is used 5 times.'''
 * I do not think it is not repeated too often. "The song" is used three times and "it" was used once. I still switched one "Today Was a Fairytale" to "it". -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Composition
 * Weiner of Slate magazine -> Since it is an online magazine, it shouldn't be in italics.
 * Done.


 * Critical reception
 * Like the lead, "TWAFT" is used several times.
 * Think I took care of it. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * became Swift's first number-one on the Canadian Hot 100, a peak it maintained for one week -> It is a fact, but the source does not state it.
 * The source says it peaked at number one for the week ending ____. That suffices. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 05:38, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Not that part, the part that says that it is her first #1 single on the Canadian Hot 100. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  05:53, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Added source. -- ipodnano05 * leave@message 19:13, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
 * debuted at number thirty-seven and peaked at number twenty-nine. -> comma (seven, and peaked)
 * Done.
 * forty-one in Ireland[19] -> forty-one in Ireland,[19]
 * Done.

This is really not too much work to do, practically are tips. On hold one week until 14 July 2010 (UTC) for the bolded comments. Tb hotch Ta lk C. 02:09, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok for me all is fine, congratulations it pass. Tb hotch Ta lk C.  19:17, 8 July 2010 (UTC)