Talk:Today the Sun's on Us/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 12:42, 10 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "the English recording artist..." Why do you include "the" in this sentence?
 * The article is written in British English, therefore it follows the variant's rules.


 * "...and others" change to "...while others"
 * Not done. It would provide weak contrast (the tone of the song doesn't really relate to the singer's vocals).


 * "...and features Ellis-Bextor and her boyfriend following another couple, and eventually stealing them" I can't clearly understand this
 * Reworded.


 * Recording and composition
 * There is a disambiguation needed
 * Fixed.


 * "...the English musician" Once again, why "the"?
 * "...the Swedish songwriter" Again
 * Rules of BrEng.


 * "and discusses "appreciating the good times"" seems a bit odd to me
 * Slightly reworded.


 * Music video
 * Do we have any reviews for the video?
 * Unfortunately, no.


 * Overall
 * Ref. 13 has problem.
 * Fixed.


 * Simon (talk) 04:20, 12 July 2014 (UTC)
 * All issues have been replied to or fixed. Thank you for your review, Simon! pedro &#124; talk 11:59, 13 July 2014 (UTC)


 * Well, nothing to concern anymore. Passing, well done! Simon (talk) 14:30, 13 July 2014 (UTC)