Talk:Tokyo Kosei Wind Orchestra

This article is unnecessarily valorative and lacks the required objectivity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 119.241.4.100 (talk) 03:22, 16 June 2014 (UTC)

Hello! Prior to my edit, the page was uncited and full of promotional language. Because of this, I looked at the "Further Reading" section and the sources within. The page was using these as citations, as some of the text on the page were word-for-word copies, but didn't have inline citations. The sources in the "Further Reading" section had a lot more information on TKWO than the page supplied, so I wrote them in, as well as giving the page more structure.  🎜Oktavia Miki🎝 talk 20:56, 6 January 2023 (UTC)