Talk:Tolkien's moral dilemma/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 23:48, 18 February 2023 (UTC)

I will review this (hopefully) tomorrow.  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 23:48, 18 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:42, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
 * I think that should be all! Surprisingly interesting; I think this article is among my favourite Tolkien articles like Valar and the cosmology article. Anyways, I think you know the drill by now,  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 22:00, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Aw, thank you!


 * all done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 22:43, 19 February 2023 (UTC)
 * Nice work as always! Very happy to pass this article for GA status per the changes implemented. Congrats!  ツ LunaEatsTuna  (💬)— 23:20, 19 February 2023 (UTC)

Copyvio check
Earwig says good to go. Quotations are good per WP:COPYQUOTE.
 * Noted.

Files
All images used are relevant, of acceptable quality and copyright-free:
 * : valid public domain rationale;
 * : CC-BY-SA 3.0.
 * Noted.

Prose

 * "like Men, who in Tolkien's Christian framework" – wikilink Men to Men in Middle-earth (as well as its first mention in the body), and also:
 * Done.


 * Do you reckon the latter could be wikilinked to Christianity in Middle-earth?
 * Done.


 * "comparable with the Medieval great chain of being" – I do not think medieval should be capitalised here.
 * Done.


 * "down to mere Beasts" – uncapitalise Beasts.
 * Done.


 * Four mentions of wargs spell their names in lowercase whilst two spell it uppercase.
 * Fixed.


 * "he imagined that, beside the Valar" – Wikilink Valar and unlink its later mention.
 * Done.


 * I would add quotation marks to Children of Ilúvatar, if that does not look too out of place?
 * Done, though people may object.


 * Maybe wikilink Ilúvatar.
 * Done.


 * "he realised that the statement about Gwaihir and Landroval's descent from Thorondor" – sounds pretty confusing; could this be elaborated upon?
 * Rewritten.


 * "by his son Christopher" - wikilink to Christopher Tolkien.
 * Done.


 * I feel like the image caption for the orc in § Dilemma could be expanded slightly, or given a bit more context in a way. Like the captions for your other ME articles. Or maybe I am just rambling.
 * Done.


 * Add a citation to the quote box.
 * Done.


 * "Shippey notes that in The Two Towers" – recommend "He notes".
 * Done.


 * "1962 letter to a Mrs. Munsby that Orc-females" – is noting her name noteworthy?
 * Moved it into the ref.


 * In the table, the sentence starting "Orcs like Gorbag have a moral" ends with a full stop while none of the others in the same table do.
 * All complete sentences in the table now end with a full stop.


 * "Evans, Jonathan (2013b)" should be just 2013 as no other sources were published in the same year.
 * Done.

Refs
Passes spotcheck on refs 3, 8, 15, 16 and 20.
 * Noted.


 * Does ref 16 need a more specific publication date? (The cited journals have only a year given)
 * Fixed.


 * Ref 20 is missing a publication date.
 * Added.

Other
Section formatting, navs, other templates and cats good.
 * Noted.


 * Add a short description.
 * Done.


 * Recommend template:use dmy dates.
 * Done.


 * Recommend template:use X English.
 * Done.


 * Please add ALT text.
 * Added.