Talk:Tolkien: A Cultural Phenomenon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 05:19, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

Hey again, I'll do this soon too. AryKun (talk) 05:19, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:47, 11 January 2022 (UTC)

That's all. AryKun (talk) 15:07, 12 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Alt text for the images.
 * Done.
 * Incorporate more of the Reception section into the lead's second paragraph.
 * Done.
 * Link for literary aesthetics, perhaps?
 * Linked.
 * Link Palgrave Macmillan.
 * Linked.
 * tableaux → portrayals
 * Linked.
 * "Rosebury shows that Tolkien simultaneously builds up a detailed picture of Middle-earth, on a journey through a series of tableaux of places realistic enough for readers to love, and goes on a quest to save Middle-earth by destroying the Ring." → The sentence is too long and it's hard to figure out what two things are occurring simultaneously.
 * Edited.
 * "Orwell and Golding to T. H. White and C. S. Lewis, with Rosebury's search for parallels among the Modernists such as Proust, Joyce, and Eliot" → The authors mentioned should all have their first names given too. Not all the readers will be familiar with them, well-known as they are.
 * Done. Painful!
 * J.R.R. Tolkien Encyclopedia → J. R. R. Tolkien Encyclopedia
 * Done.
 * Any link or gloss for what VII is?
 * Added.
 * Link Sauron.
 * Linked.
 * Could ref 16 be improved.
 * Done.
 * Cool, have passed the article. AryKun (talk) 04:23, 13 January 2022 (UTC)