Talk:Tolkien and race/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:49, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

 * during the two World Wars suggest during both World Wars
 * I avoided it as we have "both" in the sentence already.

Moral geography: West versus East

 * Any North-South bias was denied by Tolkien suggest Allegations of a North-South bias were denied by Tolkien
 * Done.

Evidence of anti-racism

 * to get published in Nazi Germany suggest in order to be published in Nazi Germany
 * Done.

Towards a balanced view

 * Suggest removing the "further reading Orc" link; as superfluous to previous links.
 * Done.


 * That is all of my suggestions, passing now. Feel free to revert any of my edits. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:50, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:06, 20 September 2021 (UTC)