Talk:Tom's Divorce/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: –– Jezhotwells (talk) 23:06, 17 April 2010 (UTC)

I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.

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Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * ' 'Meanwhile, Andy (Chris Pratt) continues his efforts to break up his ex-girlfriend Ann (Rashida Jones) and her new boyfriend Mark (Paul Schneider).'' Could we say something like "to break up the relationship between his ex-girlfriend Ann (Rashida Jones) and her new boyfriend Mark (Paul Schneider)." As it stands it reads oddly to me. ✅
 * ' 'It amounted to a five percent ratings increase over the previous week's episode, "Hunting Trip". "Tom's Divorce" drew a 2.1 rating/6 share among viewers aged between 18 and 49. It constituted about a five percent drop in viewership from the previous week's episode, "The Camel",'' This confuses me. One sentence has an increase over the previous episode "Hunting Trip", the next sentence has a drop from ""The Camel"> ✅
 * Entertainment Weekly writer Sandra Gonzalez praised said she had been awaiting a storyline centering around Tom "praised said"? {[done}}
 * There are a lot of "praised"s in this section. Can we get out the thesuarus and use some other words? ✅
 *  the singing telegraph "divorce horse" "singing telegram"? ✅
 * The writing is a little careless at times. Please check it over again.
 * I think I've addressed all of your concerns (except "singing telegram", because as far as I can tell, the horse was a singing telegram, so I'm not sure how to fix it). The error with the ratings was especially embarrassing on my part: the bit about "The Camel" somehow got copy-and-pasted in here when it didn't belong there whatsoever. It's gone now. Let me know if any more work is needed! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * I changed "singing telegraph" to "singing telegram" I understand perfectly what it is. You had written "telegraph" Please pay attention to detail.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * OK, references check out, all sources RS, the article is adequately cited.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On Hold for seven days for above issues to be checked. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 23:24, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks for addressing tehse problems. I am listing this as a Good Article. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 10:32, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On Hold for seven days for above issues to be checked. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 23:24, 17 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks for addressing tehse problems. I am listing this as a Good Article. –– Jezhotwells (talk) 10:32, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! —  Hun ter   Ka  hn  03:48, 18 April 2010 (UTC)