Talk:Tomáš Rosický/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Matty.007 (talk · contribs) 17:54, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

I'll take this on, and try and review it swiftly. Tables are my thing, so that's how the overview will be, comments below the table. Thanks, Mat  ty. 007 17:54, 18 June 2014 (UTC)

Club career
 * Rosický began his career at AC Sparta Prague, following his father Jiří and brother, also called Jiří who had previously represented the club: any years for either father or brother, caps, goals?
 * Added some insight into their playing days +ref, although caps are not readily available.
 * Tomáš debuted for Sparta in 1998: from where? Academy, signed from another club?
 * Youth team, added ref.
 * He scored five goals in the 1999–2000 season as the team won the league for the second year in succession.[4][5] He was named the "Talent of the Year" at the 1999 Czech Footballer of the Year awards.[5] Perhaps "He scored five goals in the 1999–2000 season as the team won the league for the second year in succession,[4][5] and as a result was named the "Talent of the Year" at the 1999 Czech Footballer of the Year awards.[5]"
 * No indication his five goals were the reason for receiving the award, would amount to WP:OR in my opinion.
 * Dortmund: contract length (5 years)?
 * Added.
 * Add a Bundesliga record cost from BBC ref you use?
 * Don't understand this, the article says "the most expensive player in Bundesliga history" so that is synonymous with being a record cost.
 * the most expensive Czech player of all time: the ref says he was the "Czech Republic's most expensive footballing export", which seems different (to me)
 * Agreed; wording altered to reflect the source.
 * being the first player to have a shot on target in the match: trivia?
 * removed.
 * During his first two and a half seasons with the club, Rosický played 75 league matches, scoring nine goals and registering 20 assists: where are you getting this from?
 * Same ref that followed. Have made it inline for easier access.
 * Rosický's reputation grew during his time at Dortmund and, during the latter stages of his spell at the club, Dortmund were in substantial financial trouble and could not hold onto him despite recognising his influence on the team. Press reports linked him with big money transfers to Real Madrid, Atlético Madrid, Tottenham Hotspur, Chelsea, and Arsenal. Rosický expressed a desire for Dortmund to allow him to leave at the end of the 2005–06 season, and the arrival of South African Steven Pienaar was made in preparation for Rosický's departure please source the paragraph
 * Removed. Not very good prose anyway. I have added sourced prose in place of that.
 * On 23 May 2006, Arsenal confirmed that they had signed then 25-year-old Rosický on a long-term contract add 'for an undisclosed fee'
 * added.
 * On 6 January 2007, he scored twice against Liverpool at Anfield in the FA Cup: final score?
 * added.
 * He finished his debut season at Arsenal having scored six goals in 37 appearances for the club in all competitions: does this need a ref?
 * Stats are sourced in the stats section.
 * scoring what Phil Harlow: 'scoring what the BBC journalist Phil Harlow'
 * Reworded.
 * pre-season match against Barnet in July 2009 'pre-season friendly', and add score
 * The score is not mentioned at the BBC article, which suggests to me that it is not important. Added "friendly" to wording.
 * scored the second goal: the second goal or Arsenal's second?
 * Good point, clarified.
 * against Everton to give Arsenal a point: I'm not sure you need to say they got a point, you haven't for any of the other games he played in
 * Reworded sentence.
 * resultantly scored the solitary goal of their league match against Liverpool: final score?
 * Solitary means it was the only goal.
 * Rosický finished the season with a total of three goals in 33 appearances in all club competitions: ref?
 * Ref in stats section, as above.
 * At the end of the campaign, Rosický had scored one goal and made 34 appearances in all competitions for the Gunners: ref?
 * Ref in stats section, as above.
 * Arsenal had been losing by two goals but Rosický scored Arsenal's third as Arsenal went on to win 5–2: a little confusing
 * Reworded sentence.
 * against Milan: Inter Milan or AC Milan, and wikilink
 * Done.
 * the Hawthorns: capital 'T'?
 * The Wikipedia article doesn't use capital T mid-sentence, but I am not sure, so I have reworded the sentence to avoid the issue.
 * He managed 16 competitive appearances for Arsenal, scoring three times in the 2012–13 season: ref?
 * Ref in stats section, as above.

Sorry for the fact that my on wiki time at the minute varies quite a bit, but hopefully its all downhill from here. Thanks for your review, which I'll try and resolve soon, Mat  ty. 007 12:47, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

I have addressed all your points. Thanks, C679 08:17, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Apoloogies for some of my more simple errors (only goal, asking for final score) and replying to my queries. The 'Club career' section all looks OK now.


 * 'International career': I would prefer fewer 1 sentence paragraphs, but I don't think there's much you can do with it
 * On 9 February 2011, he started in an international friendly match against Croatia at Stadion Maksimir, and scored a goal in the 45th minute in a 4–2 defeat: please source
 * Removed, inaccurate.
 * in a World Cup qualifier against San Marino: score?
 * Added.
 * In August 2006, Rosický was made captain of the Czech Republic national side, replacing the retiring Pavel Nedvěd in advance of the UEFA Euro 2008 qualifying process.[74] His last appearance of the qualifying campaign was against Slovakia in November 2007.[75] Rosický missed Euro 2008 due to injury, announcing his absence in May 2008.[33] He returned to international football when he started for the Czech Republic on 9 September 2009, in a World Cup qualifier against San Marino, following a 20 month absence due to injury.[75] On 9 February 2011, he started in an international friendly match against Croatia at Stadion Maksimir, and scored a goal in the 45th minute in a 4–2 defeat.: merge paras?
 * Merged.
 * In August 2006, Rosický was made captain of the Czech Republic national side, replacing the retiring Pavel Nedvěd in advance of the UEFA Euro 2008 qualifying process: results (i.e. how many won, drawn, lost)
 * Sorry, didn't comment here. He was made captain as an event, not connected with the qualification process but beforehand. The article makes it clear the Czech Republic qualified, but for detailed breakdown of that, I think the place is the national team page. C679 19:06, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
 * The last of these was the winning goal in the second leg of the Czech Republic's play-off against Norway to ensure qualification for the finals: score?
 * Reworded.
 * part in the first game due to suspension: score?
 * Added.
 * He played in his nation's first two matches at Euro 2000 during Patrik Berger's international suspension before Berger replaced him ahead of the Czech Republic's final game, against Denmark: scores?
 * The reference indicates they were two losses. I have added that much.

Sorry for asking for lots of scores... Thanks, Mat  ty. 007 16:16, 23 June 2014 (UTC) I have addressed all of that. Thanks, C679 19:04, 23 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you. No more review today I'm afraid, I'm working on Kingstonian so hopefully that can be finished before the deadline too, this looks like it will pass in a few days. Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  19:21, 23 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Style of play: Tomas? No accent?
 * Announcing 2012's contract extension: "announcing Rosicky's 2012 contract extension"
 * Single or double speech marks (" or '), as opposed to both
 * Arsenal manager Wenger described Rosický as having "great technique, skill on the ball and sharp passing".[9] Upon signing a contract extension in 2010, Wenger called him a "special talent" and said "Tomas' vision and touch is remarkable".[38] Announcing 2012's contract extension, Wenger called him "technically top class".[51] Wenger said of Rosický: 'He is a real Arsenal man because he is here for a long time. He is really a football player who presents the way we want to play football, because he's a team player who has pace, has a quick brain, understands the game well, and I always like to have him in the team because of all these qualities.' [80] Here there are 5 Wenger quotes. This isn't really adding much, he's his manager, he's going to sing his praises (unless he's calling them old). Remove one or two at least and find some more neutral reviews I think
 * The Guardian: wikilink?
 * Would it be possible to write some prose on individual awards, or do you feel they are adequetly mentioned in his 'Club career' (Dennis Bergkamp has prose for personal awards but I think he was more famous and won more)
 * Rsssf in caps (for abbreviation)
 * His son, also named Tomáš, was born to girlfriend Radka Kocurová in June 2013.: I'm guessing you mean this guy's son, not his dad's: make it clearer
 * He is reported to be a proficient guitarist, and has played live with Tři sestry.: he either is or isn't, what does the source say? Also, please can you say something about Tři sestry being a band?
 * Rosický was able to hone his guitar skills during his 18 months on the sidelines because of his hamstring injury: perhaps merge with previous sentence?
 * Is his playing at an awards ceremony not a little bit of trivia? That's all I think (bar a few queries regarding RS at WT:Wikiproject football). Once these are fixed, final read through and hopefully pass. I don't think I'll get Kingstonian ready in time for the end of this cup round, and I don't think I need the points but if I do I'll try and give you some warning. Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  18:09, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Oh, and which you are using as a reference has a fee for his transfer to Arsenal, is it an estimate? Thanks, Mat  ty. 007 18:11, 25 June 2014 (UTC)

Mobile edit: pass. Mat ty. 007 22:57, 28 June 2014 (UTC) Congratulations! Thanks, Mat  ty. 007 08:35, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Almost everything should be taken care of. The article doesn't specify the transfer fee that Arsenal paid, only that Arsenal signed "25-year-old Rosický on a long-term contract for an undisclosed fee". Since it was undisclosed it seems worthless to list an estimated value. I will get on to referencing the honours tomorrow. Thanks, C679 20:55, 25 June 2014 (UTC)
 * OK I have referenced the club honours and removed the individual "awards" which could not be referenced. Thanks, C679 05:06, 26 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Another suggestion was made at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Football. Directly source quote in lead, probably make Arsenal manager Arsène Wenger has described him as a player with remarkable vision, precision and first touch. a quote.
 * Not a direct quote, and not a good paraphrase for the lead; I have removed it from the lead. C679 15:25, 27 June 2014 (UTC)
 * transfer fee paid by a Bundesliga club: perhaps amount?
 * Added. C679 15:25, 27 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Fix these and I'll pass on Saturday (not on wikipedia tomorrow). Thanks, Mat  ty  .  007  20:15, 26 June 2014 (UTC)