Talk:Tomás Frías/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 06:46, 13 March 2024 (UTC)

I am quickfailing this nomination per WP:QF criteria 1: it is a long way from the GA criteria. Much of the article is cited to sources which are a century old, sometimes much more, and which are not WP:RS. There is far too much excessive detail: why does the "Reformation of Bolivia's education system (1845–1846)" section contain 450 words detailing individual decrees which could simply be summarized? Why are individual events described in a action-novel tone? And finally, why are there so many lengthy quotes, going far over what WP:LIMITED requires? This bloated article urgently needs to be cut of probably half its content. &#126;~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 06:49, 13 March 2024 (UTC)