Talk:Tom Eastick/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 07:30, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Sorry it's taking me this long to get to this, wound up being way busier than I thought I would be.


 * "Having served for four years in the senior cadets" - what exactly was the senior cadets? Is this a pre-military school, a local militia group, or something else?
 * In 1911, universal service for boys 12 to 18 (and adults to 26) was introduced in Australia, it continued until 1929. The senior cadets were the older ones (14-18). Linked to Conscription in Australia#Universal Service Scheme. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:25, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Was he also made a Lt. Col. in the AIF? Or did his rank in the Militia automatically transfer over?
 * The former, clarified. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:32, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * How many guns did the 2/7 have?
 * "its participation in the campaign was broken up into two primary operations: the Battle of Tarakan, a landing on Tarakan; and Operation Oboe Six, a landing on Brunei, and the Battle of Labuan on Labuan" - So was Labuan part of Oboe Six?
 * Amended very clunky prose, hopefully clearer now. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:30, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Is cause of death known
 * Not in sources. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:30, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Publishing location of Keat Gin?
 * Added. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:30, 9 December 2021 (UTC)


 * A number of the listed news sources don't seem to be used, should they be removed?
 * Yes, I'm developing it towards an ACR nom, so they are part of the work. I can move them to further reading for now, but it seems a bit pointless. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:30, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

Looks to be in quite good shape. Hog Farm Talk 07:01, 1 December 2021 (UTC)
 * Meets all of the criteria at this point, promoting. Hog Farm Talk 22:05, 9 December 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks HF! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:36, 10 December 2021 (UTC)