Talk:Tom Hawkins (footballer, born 1988)

"young Superstar"
not doubting his stardom, but 2 of the most experianced defenders, Thornton and Fergison are not "most experianced" defenders

copyediting?
I skimmed through the page and found quite a few misplaced commas and other issues that make it baffling that this article was ever given a "good" grade. While I've fixed what I found, I'm not confident enough to call this a "good" article without further review. In my opinion, a "good" article should be flawless when it comes to matters of grammar and punctuation (at least at such time the article is reviewed). I think the GA status should be reviewed again, as it has been more than six years. Electricmaster (talk) 13:55, 7 January 2023 (UTC)