Talk:Tom Joyce

This article has been rated with a Stub Class and has been noted in the Talk page as within the scope of WikiProject Biography. The article has a maintenance template message for neutral point of view compliance. I am proposing the following major edits for Talk page feedback to cleanup the article: Early Life and Career 1. Remove last part of sentence in first paragraph (each project advancing his understanding and skill.[6]). This content does not appear in the cited reference and is not written in NPOV. 2. Edit (presented at more than 100 institutions, universities and college campuses throughout the United States and abroad.[7]). Change "more than 100" to numerous. NewQi (talk) 18:52, 1 January 2017 (UTC)