Talk:Tomb of the Unknown Soldier (Moscow)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 4 June 2019 and 31 July 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jade8068.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 11:28, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Brief review

 * Jade8068, if you want any credit for this assignment you'll have to write more than this--but perhaps this is not the best article to review. Remember what I said in class. Dr Aaij (talk) 15:55, 14 June 2019 (UTC)

I think this is a very well written article. Although there are a few things that should be added. The facts were interesting but they were mostly all merged together. This article can also use more citations. In the beginning, it was basically depending on only one source. It is very important to provide citations for just about everything to back up your statements. I also think that it can use more headings to separate and organize the article. More heading will make it look more organized. Headers will help incoming readers find specific things that they may be looking for. Where it talks about the remains, I added in a citation. I proceeded to do this for another sentence dealing with the location. I feel that is important to put the location of this attraction in its own section for future tourists and visitors. This is a convenient accessory to help it be more "straight forward". I then added the headers, History and Appearance, to include even more organization. I am working to add more facts and citations about the tomb in relations to the war underneath the "History" heading. Providing more about the relations to the war will help readers get a better connection with the reasoning of the tomb. I started on a paragraph underneath the "History" heading for more information dealing with the war. I am making sure to provide citations for this as well. I think adding an updated version on the tomb, as far as rules, appearance, guards, etc., will grasp the readers attention because it will show where it stands today. (2019) Jade8068 (talk) 15:59, 17 June 2019 (UTC)