Talk:Tommy Lawton/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 08:49, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Early life
 * What does "Snr" mean?
 * It means senior in British English, apparenrly Americans just say sr. I just changed it to senior to avoid confusion.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * I am not sure if links are needed for the professions of the parents
 * OK.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Lawton's natural ability What ability is being referred to here?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Club career
 * Link "Centre-forward" at first mention
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Personal
 * Don't begin the section with "He", say "Lawton".
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * He published a total of four books...When the Cheering Stopped (1973). Source?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Career statistics
 * The section can have a similar line preceding the table stating that ref. 2 is the source for the table (as implied)
 * Done.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)

Rest looks good to me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:49, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * OK, thanks again!--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Just looked at the references. I think ref 132 should rather be a note. Sainsf  (talk · contribs) 07:53, 14 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:19, 14 June 2016 (UTC)

Fine, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:07, 16 June 2016 (UTC)