Talk:Tommy Tallarico/Archive 2

Hbomberguy video
The paragraph about the Hbomberguy vid should be in the "Career" section not "Personal Life" Spongebongs (talk) 13:25, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * that is...
 * actually pretty fair ngl
 * do you want to change it, or should i do it?  cogsan (give me attention)  (see my deeds) 13:30, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
 * you can do it if you want, I don't think I have permission to edit the page :/ Spongebongs (talk) 14:15, 17 November 2023 (UTC)
 * oh, yeah, it's protected, my bad
 * i did it, then  cogsan (give me attention)  (see my deeds) 14:20, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 4 December 2023
VGL's Guinness records have been revoked. 209.161.227.130 (talk) 17:33, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
 * ❌ - Please include a reliable source that verifies this claim and specific text changes you want made. Sergecross73   msg me  18:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)

Double Sentence?
The sentence "In November 2022, British YouTuber Harris "Hbomberguy" Brewis published a video essay which documented many high-profile false claims that Tallarico had made concerning his career." Appears in both the main body of the page and in the career section. Not sure which place it's supposed to be 2610:148:1F02:6000:50D7:3DE5:4FBB:B3B4 (talk) 16:15, 5 December 2023 (UTC)


 * The WP:LEAD (intro) is supposed to briefly summarize the content that is covered in the rest of the article. It looks like a newbie yesterday did a rather poor job of writing an intro, and the intro should be reworded so it's not so redundant (or detailed) as the body content. Sergecross73   msg me  16:25, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
 * i think just cutting down a few words should work
 * something like "In 2022, YouTuber Harris 'Hbomberguy' Brewis published a video essay documenting false claims that Tallarico had made."  cogsan (give me attention)  (see my deeds) 16:43, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
 * I've revised the statement. Also notes that it was publications that made note of it, or otherwise it's likely to be removed, as we generally would not include commentary from self-published YouTubers on a WP:BLP. Sergecross73   msg me  16:49, 5 December 2023 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 10 December 2023
There needs to be a "Controversy" section added, tabulating Tommy's documented history of lying about his accomplishments, taking credit for other people's work, and illegal activity (see: United States c. Thomas Andrew Tallarico). Most of the pertinent information can be found in the following YouTube investigative documentary: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0twDETh6QaI

At the very least, his legal history of lying and federal crime should be listed. 74.99.88.219 (talk) 20:39, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
 * ❌ per WP:CSECTION, WP:YOUTUBE, and WP:BLPSPS. Sergecross73   msg me  21:12, 10 December 2023 (UTC)