Talk:Tommy the Cat

Untitled
Whoever created this article needs serious improvement on sentence structure, I'll fix that.

Done
I think I've fixed this page as much as I can so far (psobot, sorry, not logged in).

Grandfather on "Suck on This"?
Can you guys point out his grandfathers voice for me? I don't hear a strange voice on that track. Hanz ofbyotch (talk) 00:21, 18 February 2010 (UTC)

Too Opinionated
On the third paragrapher it feels like the author is writing a song review, not an encylopedia page. Thanks.

Primus and Waits
Does anyone know how the band met Tom Waits?

Bad Writing
This page is very badly written. Some one with writing skills, please fix it.==

"regular music channels"
"In the summer of 1991, the video was released and received heavy airplay on MTV, but was infrequently shown on the regular music channels." -- Can someone validate this statement before I just erase it entirely? What does it mean by "regular music channels"? In 1991, there was MTV, VH1, and what, like MTV2...  I really don't understand - you can't get anymore "regular" than MTV circa '91. BubbaStrangelove (talk) 14:28, 26 May 2009 (UTC)]

I *think* I improved it some.
There as a lot of unsourced stuff, like what bass Claypool uses, and a lot of subjective words --- I would hardly call the song a "smash hit" and the interpretation that was listed for the song (about an alley cat looking for love), is totally arguable, and really unfeasible given the lyrics. They suggest the contrary, that a female cat wandered into an alleyway looking for the ultimate stud cat, and his name was Tommy the Cat. http://www.lyricsfreak.com/p/primus/tommy+the+cat_20110928.html BubbaStrangelove (talk) 14:55, 26 May 2009 (UTC)