Talk:Tomorrow I Go/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Will do initial comments now, but more to come shortly. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead
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 * Infobox looks good, apart from the absence of a single chronology
 * "is a song performed by Albanian" → "is a song by Albanian"
 * Target CD to Compact disc
 * "song which incorporates" → "track that incorporates"
 * "in its instrumentation" → "in the instrumentation"
 * "It lyrically discusses" → "Lyrically, the song discusses"
 * Remove wikilink on love as it's too obvious
 * "marriage also reflecting a story" → "marriage, while also reflecting the story"
 * "The song represented Albania in" → ""Tomorrow I Go" represented Albania for"
 * "pre-selection competition Festivali i Këngës with" → "pre-selection competition, Festivali i Këngës, with"
 * "with the" → "with the song's"
 * "version "Nesër shkoj"
 * "the sixteenth place in a field of twenty four scoring a total of fifty three points" → "the 16th place in a field of 24, scoring a total of 35 points"
 * "her Albanian-themed performance" → "her Albanian-themed performance of the song"

Background and composition
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 * Start this section off with mentioning who wrote and composed the original song
 * "In 2004, Ledina Çelo was" → "In 2004, Çelo was"
 * "As part from the competition's rules" → "For complying with the competition's rules"
 * "The singer took part" → "Çelo took part"
 * "song "Nesër shkoj" composed by Adrian Hila and written by Pandi Laço" → "song "Nesër shkoj", composed by Hila and written by Laço"
 * "Musically, the song is" → "Musically, the latter is"
 * "song incorporating traditional" → "song that incorporates traditional"
 * Target Albanian Instruments to Music of Albania instead
 * "Lyrically, it discusses" → "Lyrically, the track discusses"
 * Remove wikilink on love
 * Add wikilink on wedding like in the lead

Promotion and release
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 * Retitle to Release and promotion
 * Swap the order of release info around with promotion info
 * Wikilink Eurovision Song Contest to itself
 * Any more info on the video?
 * "on 29 April 2005 as" → "on 29 April 2005, as"
 * "A standalone download was made available on" → "The song was made available for digital download on"
 * 14 February 2018 through" → "14 February 2018 by" to avoid repetitive wording
 * Mention the other label as well as RTSH

Festivali i Këngës
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 * Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës
 * "to determine country's" → "to determine the country's"
 * Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2005
 * "It consisted of two semi-finals" → "The former consisted of two semi-finals"
 * "on 16 and 17 December, and the grand final on 18 December 2004" → "on 16 and 17 December 2004, and the grand final on 18 December of that year"
 * "in which, Ledina Çelo was chosen" → "which included Çelo being chosen"
 * "represent the country" → "represent Albania"

Kyiv
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 * Remove the target on 50th edition as that's already been wikilinked to
 * Do the same for Eurovision Song Contest and Kyiv wikilinks
 * "on 19 May and the grand final on 21 May 2005" → "on 19 May 2005 and the grand final three days later"
 * "to the then-Eurovision rules" → "to the Eurovision rules at the time"
 * "except the host country" → "apart from the host country"
 * " and the " → ", and the "
 * "final, although, the top ten" → "final. However, the top ten"
 * "the top 10 result in the previous year" → "the top ten result of the previous year"
 * "In the grand final, the country" → "In the grand final, Albania"
 * "sixteenth place in a field of twenty four with 53 points" → "16th place in a field of 24, with 53 points"
 * Mention the performance was of the song
 * "dressed with traditional" → "dressed in traditional"

Track listing

 * Good

Release history
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 * Are you sure the CD should be included in this table since it is part of a compilation?
 * Like I said, only centre the ref; take "Hear My Plea" for example

Final comments and verdict

 * Will get round to the other sections being reviewed soon, hence my listing of them above. --Kyle Peake (talk) 18:11, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * as this is quite a short article but needs a few fixes before GA status. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:01, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * I did the changes you've requested.--Lorik17 (talk) 21:57, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ as things have been sorted; however, I have noticed during multiple reviews that you seem to not understand my comments about the references quite often. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:25, 8 May 2020 (UTC)