Talk:Tomorrowland (film)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 18:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 18:40, 20 January 2021 (UTC)

The Optimist

 * This section looks like it could be moved under production as a subsection after filming.
 * Would a rename to Other media work? Rusted AutoParts  14:14, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Yes. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 14:26, 21 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✔️ Chompy Ace 15:11, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Soundtrack

 * Move this section under production.
 * ✅ Rusted AutoParts  14:13, 21 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The BBFC citation isn't working for me.
 * new link Chompy Ace 14:08, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The Box Office Mojo reference should link to the film's title summary, not its domestic release.
 * ✅, fixed using cite BOM Chompy Ace 22:03, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Link the citation from The New York Times as either "url-access=limited" or "url-access=subscription". Additionally, I couldn't find any mentions of a genre in the archive, so I'm wondering what exactly is the purpose of the reference and if it can be replaced with something else.
 * ✅, NYT reference removed, replaced with primary genre Chompy Ace 15:01, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * No need for references in the lead about writers/actors/release date.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 15:04, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The "press kit" reference after "five countries" isn't working for me.
 * Chompy Ace 15:06, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This reference and this reference don't mention anything about the "musical score".
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 15:08, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "box office bomb".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:03, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark all citations from The New York Times as either "url-access=limited" or "url-access=subscription".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:08, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This reference says the marketing cost was $280 million, not $330 million.
 * ✔️ by User:Rusted AutoParts. Chompy Ace 14:01, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * "$120–140 million" "$120–150 million" per this reference.
 * ✔️ by User:Rusted AutoParts. Chompy Ace 14:01, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * The entire plot section is 736 words, failing WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Shaved to 689. ✅ Rusted AutoParts  14:19, 21 January 2021 (UTC)


 * In the cast section, add a reference that says Hugo was one of the "Fathers of Science Fiction" and another about the "Hugo Awards".
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 14:23, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't George Clooney be credited before Britt Robertson?
 * ✔️ by User:Rusted AutoParts. Chompy Ace 14:20, 22 January 2021 (UTC)
 * This wasn't changed... Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 02:24, 23 January 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ that is based on the credits order Chompy Ace 02:37, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Development

 * In the quote box, remove the words "Bird said."
 * ✅, replaced with "[...]" Chompy Ace 14:25, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Link George Clooney, Hugh Laurie, and Britt Robertson.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:26, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "developmental unit" as "url-access=limited".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:28, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The citations after "unidentified metal object" and "many of its contents" aren't working; mark them as dead.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:29, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Filming

 * Distribute the first three references about filming.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 01:52, 23 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This reference says filming began August 8.
 * Chompy Ace 14:30, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Mark the reference after "Valencia" as being in Spanish, and add a "trans-title=" parameter.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:37, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Music

 * Move the only reference in this section to the end of the sentence it's in.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 15:12, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "in theaters and IMAX. Tomorrowland was the first film" "in theaters and IMAX, and was the first film"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:03, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Home media

 * The "behind-the-scenes featurettes" and "the Plus-Ultra animated short film" aren't mentioned in this reference.
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 14:10, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Combine both paragraphs into one.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 15:09, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Other media

 * This reference says that "The Optimist" was launched on July 3, 2013.
 * Chompy Ace 14:38, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * A reference is needed for the claim that "The Optimist" ended on August 11, 2013.
 * ✅ added reference Chompy Ace 02:38, 23 January 2021 (UTC)


 * I think it's better if this section becomes a subsection under release.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 15:12, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Box office

 * "$115.7 million" "$115.6 million"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:36, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * "$209.2 million" "$209 million"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:36, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * "between $120 and $140 million" "between $120 and $150 million"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:36, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This reference doesn't say anything about the film costing "$330 million to produce and market". Additionally, this reference says the marketing cost was actually $280 million.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:37, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The references after "second week)" and "701 theaters" aren't working for me. Probably just an incorrect link input in the url parameter.
 * Chompy Ace 15:29, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The second reference after "$30.8 million", from Box Office Mojo", isn't really needed as it's covered in the first citation.
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 21:51, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The first references after "$30.8 million" and "$37.8 million in 2010" link to the same page.
 * ✔️ per consistency of film-related articles Chompy Ace 22:09, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Distribute the four references after "Japan ($2.1 million)."
 * ✔️ per consistency of film-related articles Chompy Ace 02:01, 23 January 2021 (UTC)


 * No mention of "$9.7 million on its opening day" in this reference, or "$725,000 during its early Thursday night showings" in this one.
 * ✅ removed Chompy Ace 13:59, 23 January 2021 (UTC)

Critical response

 * "based on 294 reviews" "based on 297 reviews"
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:17, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * There should only be one reference to Rotten Tomatoes, not two.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:17, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Everything else looks good.
 * ✔️ Chompy Ace 14:17, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Accolades

 * References are needed for each award ceremony/group.
 * ✅, with verdicts Chompy Ace 22:37, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Accolades sections look better with reference columns, so I suggest adding one.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:15, 22 January 2021 (UTC)

Images

 * Improve the rationale of the film's poster (this non-free use rationale is recommended).
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 21:47, 22 January 2021 (UTC)


 * "a background in Tomorrowland" "a background in the film."
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 14:34, 22 January 2021 (UTC)