Talk:Tony Knowles (snooker player)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tayi Arajakate (talk · contribs) 17:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello BennyOnTheLoose, I'll be taking up the review for this nomination and will present it to you in a couple of days. I hope you will find my feedback to be helpful. Cheers! Tayi Arajakate  Talk 17:09, 7 January 2022 (UTC)
 * , apologies for having delayed this for so long. The article more or less complies with the good article criteria except a handful minor issues. So I'm going to go ahead and pass this but do take note of the comments below. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 11:24, 2 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, . I've made some changes as noted below. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:43, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Looks good now, I've updated the assessment table below. Tayi Arajakate  Talk 09:31, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

 * "...first wound of the 1981 World Snooker Championship...", typo.
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * "... Reardon by the same score in round two ... Ray Reardon (the second seed) ...", the first mention of Reardon should contain his full name and be wikilinked, instead of the second mention.
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * This is just a minor quibble and feel free to take this more as a suggestion; most last paragraph of the career section could perhaps be integrated in the chronological order that the rest of the section follows? For example, his highest ranking only appears in the last paragraph even though some of his other rankings is mentioned from time to time in a chronological order.
 * Another suggestion would be that if possible, the section on his career could be expanded further? It appears more as major highlights rather than a comprehensive chronology. For instance, the section on performance and rankings timeline contains many tournaments which don't feature in the section on career.
 * The lead should perhaps mention that he is commonly or alternatively called Tony.
 * I've had a look at some other "Tony" GAs and on balance I've not amended for this, per MOS:HYPOCORISM. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)
 * His team members in the 1983 World Team Classic are only mentioned in the lead.
 * Amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:40, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

Assessment
 Comprehension: The comprehension is good.

Verifiability: The article is verifiable.

Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive enough for the good article criteria.

Neutrality: The article is neutral.

Stability: The article is stable. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.

