Talk:Tony Renna/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 06:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead
 * finishing second at the United States team — for the United States team?
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * was driver coach — was a driving coach? was the driving coach?
 * Chose the latter option MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Early and personal life
 * As a child, he was a batboy for the New York Yankees baseball team — When they played in California? Or in New York?
 * That is not stated in any of the sources MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Jim O'Bryan ... asked if Renna was interested in driving in Europe — When?
 * Added MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I mean when did O'Bryan ask?
 * Have added that information MWright96 (talk) 19:02, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Junior career
 * This would be much easier to read if given one or two subsections.
 * Added three subsections MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * That's looks far better, thanks.

IndyCar Series career
 * an agreement for Renna to drive for PacWest's CART team failed — Why?
 * The reason was not given by the team MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Might want to state that Al Unser Jr. drove for Kelley Racing when he is first mentioned in this section.
 * Added MWright96 (talk)
 * and to partner 2003 IndyCar Series champion Scott Dixon — Partner with?
 * Done MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Is there a natural point to add a subsection?
 * Moved some information to the prior subsection in the article MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Death
 * without having made any prior collision against the trackside SAFER barriers — Is the significance of this that they were unlikely to be damaged before he hit them?
 * Yes, that is the case MWright96 (talk) 06:49, 7 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall
 * Looks good,, very little to point out. A few of the sections do look like walls of text; using subsections, or even adding some more photographs, would help. --Usernameunique (talk) 06:00, 7 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Great, passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 19:08, 7 April 2020 (UTC)