Talk:Torpedo...Los!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead is a bit lacking. Can it be expanded a bit?
 * How is it now?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * When it last sold in 1989 --> When it was last sold in 1989
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Details --> Description
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Critical commentary --> Reception
 * Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I see no other issues with the article. It is well written and sourced.

Copyvio in the long quotes in footnotes should be addressed. Author should use original wording rather that quote everything. MathewTownsend (talk) 21:40, 26 July 2012 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed; passing the article! Statυs  (talk) 07:16, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * comment