Talk:Tour DuPont/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:39, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

Will review tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 19:39, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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General

 * All mention of the word organiser(s) should be organizer(s) since the event occurred in the United States

Lead

 * Delink United States per WP:OVERLINK

Origins of the Tour DuPont

 * Wikilink 1987 Tour de France
 * " who had finished second in Paris-Roubaix that year," - missing "the"
 * "in his first year as a pro," - professional

DuPont sponsorship

 * "of local government in Greenville, South Carolina," - missing "the"
 * "with Armstrong finishing second for a second successive year." - reptition of second
 * "The final edition of the race, held in 1996, was also won by Armstrong, who became the first and only rider to win two editions of the race back-to-back" - reptition of "race". replace with event in its second mention

Legacy

 * "Organisers Packer and Plant organised another race," - Organizers and I think arranged would be better in the second mention to avoid reptition of the same word.