Talk:Toxi

Biais against encyclopedic tone
The authors of this page really put towards their personal opinions and ideology as facts rather than taking an emotional distance from the subject, many sentences don't have sources to back them up. The article feel preachy and non-encyclopedic (and thus against the rules of Wikipedia). Any ideas on how to correct it? --96.22.228.193 (talk) 23:06, 22 September 2021 (UTC)


 * Yes, I totally agree. The editorializing in the latter half of the entry is of the quality of a secondary school essay. It is tendentious, unsourced, and poorly written. Fredhedges (talk) 04:26, 29 August 2022 (UTC)
 * I noticed it very strongly too. Even as much as I agreed with points they were making, it's not fit for Wikipedia Davidalejandromc (talk) 22:31, 4 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Oh wow, it says the editor was a student editor, so you're technically right Davidalejandromc (talk) 22:33, 4 February 2024 (UTC)

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