Talk:Toyohara Kunichika/GA2

GA Review
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 * ", (1835 — 1900)" – remove the comma, and remove the spaces around the em dash
 * The lead needs to be expanded. Keep the two paragraphs, but expand on them.
 * I believe a space is missing in "for ukiyo-eactor-prints"?
 * "i.e. woodblock" &rarr; "which are woodblock"
 * "on June 5, 1835, in" – link this correctly per MOS:DATE
 * "Like most artists of his era and genre" – this paragraph needs a reference
 * "Examples of signatures" – use the Gallery tag for this section; have a look at Help:Gallery

Gary King ( talk ) 04:20, 28 June 2008 (UTC)

GA Review Revisited
I have made extensive updates. I am waiting for a permission for a section discussing signatures, but that is something I can do in the future. I would say the article is now ready for GA review. Thank you for everyone's patience and assistance. --clhowson (talk) 00:29, 8 July 2008 (UTC)


 * "on (June 5, 1835), in" &rarr; "on June 5, 1835, in"
 * "Kunisada - 1865" &rarr; "Kunisada (1865)". Same goes for the other image captions.
 * References need to be formatted per WP:CITE/ES; many of them are missing a publisher.

Gary King ( talk ) 00:45, 8 July 2008 (UTC)


 * References 4, 6, 15, 19, 27, 35, and 41 are missing publishers. An example of web publishers can be found at Call_of_Duty_4:_Modern_Warfare. Gary King ( talk ) 16:19, 8 July 2008 (UTC)

Web citations have been fixed. My images have suddenly reappeared. I consider the article good to go. --clhowson (talk) 15:28, 9 July 2008 (UTC)

Please use em dashes for year ranges, like in "(1841-1898)", per WP:DASH. Gary King ( talk ) 00:21, 10 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Now that I have done this, I find that the page you referred me to says: "Year ranges, like all ranges, are separated by an en dash (do not use a hyphen or slash (2005–08, not 2005-08 or 2005/08). A closing CE-AD year is normally written with two digits (1881–86) unless it is in a different century from that of the opening year (1881–1986)."

--clhowson (talk) 14:28, 10 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Ah yes; first time I got that wrong – I posted that late at night. I fixed them. Page ranges in the references also need to use en dashes; for example, "pp 7-8" &rarr; "pp 7–8". Gary King ( talk ) 19:14, 10 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Okay, I'm game. What next?

--clhowson (talk) 21:30, 10 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Please expand the lead to better summarize the entire article, per WP:LEAD.
 * Could you copyedit the article? Some things, like "on (June 5, 1835), in ", don't make sense, and should instead be "on June 5, 1835, in "
 * "as "Toyohara Kunichika" was born "Ōshima Yasohachi" on" – remove the quotes
 * commas are needed in some places for pause; for instance, "Little is known about his childhood, but young Yasohachi,"
 * ""Kazunobu."" &rarr; ""Kazunobu"." – punctuation goes outside of quote if it is not appropriate inside them per WP:PUNC. Happens several times in the article.

Gary King ( talk ) 00:51, 11 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you, Gary. Next?

--clhowson (talk) 19:29, 11 July 2008 (UTC)


 * You have done excellent work on the article. Great job! I will now pass it for GA. Gary King ( talk ) 19:32, 11 July 2008 (UTC)