Talk:Trópico (Ricardo Arjona album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 04:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing it. &mdash;  Yash [talk] 04:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

Lead

 * is a compilation album - a? I mean, cannot it be like first? second?
 * Not exactly which would it be. he has released like 25. let me take a look.
 * The album is composed - The album consists
 * and performed either - which are performed either
 * or by other latin musicians - or by other latin artists
 * Several songs included in Trópico - Several songs included in the album
 * eight years prior - eight years before
 * borrowed - any better word other than this?
 * It also received a positive critical reception, with Jason Birchmeier from Allmusic awarding the album three-and-a-half stars out of five. - The album received positive critical reception, with Jason Birchmeier from Allmusic awarding the album three-and-a-half stars out of five.

Composition

 * Trópico is a collection of Arjona's past - The album is a collection of Arjona's past - because "the album" would sound odd in the second line following this
 * eight years prior, in 2001 - what? eight years prior? 2001? I guess we live in 2009 =P - you have also used "eight years" in the lead so please be factually accurate and consistent
 * Any link for "Puerto Rican" ?
 * included in Trópico is a - included in Trópico was a
 * Huey Dunbar performed "Desnuda". The song was originally - Huey Dunbar performed "Desnuda" which was originally
 * the album is performed - the album was performed
 * Also, the album - The album also

Reception

 * On its second week, the album jumped to position 62. Two weeks later, Trópico reached number 23 - In its second week, the album jumped to position 62 and two weeks later, Trópico reached number 23
 * Remove the template since you have already stated the thing about 3.5* in the lead as well as in the prose.

&mdash;  Yash [talk] 14:13, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Okay done all :) — ΛΧΣ  21  21:56, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
 * ✅ Yash! has retired. Passing since all issues mentioned by Yash! were fixed. Vaca  tion  9  01:41, 30 January 2013 (UTC)