Talk:Trần Lập

Needs improvement
This was recreated. Needs a lot of improvement - assuming notable? In ictu oculi (talk) 23:45, 3 December 2012 (UTC)

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GOCE
NightHeron (talk) 01:28, 2 November 2023 (UTC) ✅ NightHeron (talk) 17:52, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

Remove the template
Hi, @Bonthefox3, I noticed that you had put the template Expand Vietnamese on the top of the artice, but it has been fully translated from Vietnamese wikipedian. Would you mind removing that template? Mintu Martin (talk) 11:27, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Done! :3 Bonthefox3 (talk) 11:37, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Suggested minor improvements for English-language accessibility
1.	Bức Tường in the lead should have a translation in parentheses.

2.	Note that the recently added link for the song “Đường đến ngày vinh quang” is a red-link, and so will not help the reader. I think it might be best to refer to that song by the English translation “Road to Glory Days” (for consistency and sound I’d suggest changing “glorious” to “glory”) in the main body (starting with Lập wrote the song "Road to Glory Days" in 1998), since otherwise readers who know no Vietnamese might be puzzled by the long title and not realize that the title given only in Vietnamese is the same as the one that was translated earlier.

3.	Vượt qua thử thách  should have a translation in parentheses.

4.	Tâm hồn của đá and Vô hình should also have a translation, and so should  Những hòn đá lăn  later in the same paragraph.

5.	Dấu ấn needs a translatoin in parentheses.

6.	Bên kia Bức Tường needs a translation in parentheses.

7.	Trở về  needs a translation in parentheses.

Thanks. NightHeron (talk) 12:17, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * @NightHeron Thanks a lot! I edit the article according to your suggestion! Mintu Martin (talk) 07:08, 20 November 2023 (UTC)