Talk:Tracy Does Conan/GA1

GA Review
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There are only a few little fixes that need to be made for the article to pass GAN: That's pretty much it. You've got seven days to make changes so good luck in that time! — 97198   talk  07:27, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It was written by, the series' creator and executive producer -- don't need comma.
 * it was directed by, one of the season's supervising producers -- and again.
 * Change 6PM to 6 p.m. or 6 pm, per WP:MOSNUM.
 * he hasn't been taking his medication correctly -- convert contraction to "has not".
 * Liz gives the instructions to Kenneth Parcell (Jack McBrayer) who has to visit multiple identical until he finds the correct one, which will have Tracy's new medication -- this whole sentence doesn't make sense to me, from the fact that he has to "visit multiple identical" onwards. Maybe there's a word missing in there?
 * watching television at the time of the broadcast, in the U.S. -- even though it looks weird, you'll need another full-stop/period in there to indicate the sentence end.
 * Close Matt Webb Mitovich's second quote.
 * I think Robert Canning's review has been given a little too much weight; WP:MOSTV advises that reviewers' comments should not exceed about two per critic, and Canning currently has four, including the 5/10 rating.
 * Good work, and awesome new sig, by the way :) I'm happy to promote the article. — 97198   talk  13:06, 31 July 2008 (UTC)