Talk:Traditional games of Korea

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Team 4 To do list Each group members has responsible for each sections.
 * Jung Hyun Lee has responsible for Characteristic of Korea’s traditional games and Traditional games in Modern Korea Society
 * Hyegyeong Yun has responsible for Meaning of Korea’s traditional games
 * Sanha Lee has responsible for  History of Korea’s traditional games 
 * All group members has reponsible for Kind of Korea’s traditional games, Gallery, Reference, External links — Preceding unsigned comment added by LEE JUNG HYUN (talk • contribs) 12:38, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Members: Jung-hyun Lee, Hyegyeong Yun, Sanha Lee

First assignment: To do list (the whole outline of the article)

From old times, mainly ordinary person play traditional game on national holiday or a special case for entertainment. And Children play games for education and entertainment. Korea’s traditional game is rich in history. It is closely connected with ancestors of lives. Also, it changes according to the times. We can know the life of the period. Korea’s traditional games are worth taking note. So, This article introduces the traditional games of Korea for people who don’t know well about traditional game and foreigners who want to know about Korea.

Traditional games of Korea article divided 8 parts. History of Korea’s traditional games, Characteristic of Korea’s traditional games, Kind of Korea’s traditional games, Meaning of Korea’s traditional games, Traditional games in modern Korea society and Gallery, Reference, External links are also will be covered in this article. Korea’s traditional games subdivide into several categories. There are many kinds of traditional game like jae-ki-cha-gi(제기차기), yoot-no-ri(윷놀이), top-spinning game(팽이치기), sledding(썰매타기), stick-tossing games(자치기), stone hitting game(비석차기), a one-legged fight(닭싸움) and so on. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.104.211.240 (talk) 12:21, 13 April 2013 (UTC)

Sections

1.History of Korea’s traditional games

2.Characteristic of Korea’s traditional games

3.Kind of Korea’s traditional games

4.Meaning of Korea’s traditional games

5.Traditional games in Modern Korea Society

6.Gallery

7.Reference

8.External links


 * The overall plan looks reasonable, but you need to provide a list of references you will use. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 03:59, 19 April 2013 (UTC)

This subject is also unique. Also arrange is looks good. But this article is not contain content. So fill the content is useful for this article. HaeYoon (talk) 10:06, 21 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi I am sehyun Oh. I agree with Piotrus.I think the most important thing your team have to do is find some useful references for your article. But plans that you wrote above is good. I really expect this article.Dhtpgus90 (talk) 12:40, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Deletion warning
Please note that as I warned few days ago, due to lack of content this article is now facing deletion. If no content is added to it within the next day or two, it may be deleted. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 12:59, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

to Traditional games of Korea
hollo i'm jeoung sae young in Group 1. your article is arranged clearly but This section is empty...--116.121.56.175 (talk) 13:04, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

Before givien suggestions of contents, your team should escape crisis of deletion! I hope your team solve this problem. --Minzi Yuk (talk) 13:30, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

OMG...I was interested by this article when I saw it. Because I like Korea traditional games especially Yutnolee. I think this is good information, but have to improve it. Please develop this article and make me surprise^^. Good luck.--Young Seong Kim (talk) 13:39, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

WARNING WARNING !!!!!! This page may be deleted!!!! You better hurry!! because in our page's case, it was deleted twice because it seemed promotional. So if you are editing later, please be careful of the text ;) neutrally edit please — Preceding unsigned comment added by GaHee Park (talk • contribs) 14:45, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

I'm concerned about your lack of information on a article page.Said to say..but I guess your article page might be deleted within one week or so.My group also experienced with deletion. Hope your group members cope with this situation! Sang Kuk Son 17:17, 21 April 2013 (UTC)

My suggestion.
I think how to play traditional game need to be added in this article. And meanings of respectively games can be good to your article. For example, Tug of War played in Korea for predicting harvest. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Choi Hyun Hee (talk • contribs) 07:24, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

This article'idea is good.However, there is a little contents so if you add many contents such as images, this article is useful!--Bohyunlee (talk) 14:52, 22 April 2013 (UTC)

Instructor review

 * WP:LEAD: missing
 * History section: a good idea, but most of it simply repeats History of Korea - totally unnecessary here. It also suffers from bad style (WP:EDITORIALIZING, "So we must know" - avoid second person pronoun, see WP:YOU).
 * References: two out of three references are for Korean Wikipedia; this is unacceptable - Wikipedia cannot be used for own references. You need to find reference outside Wikipedia. Remember to translate the reference description, it should be dual language. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 05:33, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
 * You haven't finished starting the peer review. You still need to chose category (arts), and fill in the request. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 05:18, 17 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I have not seen any significant editing here since early May. This article needs all the issues raised above addressed! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 06:40, 30 May 2013 (UTC)

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Sources and original research
Please stop adding information without adding a source. I think a lot of the information in the later parts of the article are what's called WP:ORIGINALRESEARCH; basically things people know firsthand but don't have a source to link it back to. Original research is basically useless on Wikipedia; we rely on sources. Do not add any more of it. toobigtokale (talk) 21:39, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * I deleted a bunch of the unsourced info; it was poorly written (see my message in edit history). Even if the information is slightly useful and probably mostly true, it's better if we wait until someone adds it back with a source. toobigtokale (talk) 21:43, 10 August 2023 (UTC)