Talk:Trapped in an Elevator for 41 Hours

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This article is written a little too breathlessly for WP. There's a lot of unnecessary details. I'm sure that with a little bold deleting, this article could be greatly improved.75.118.52.97 (talk) 14:45, 30 January 2012 (UTC)

This article copied a large mount of paragraph from the New Yorker magazine's article: Up and the down. http://www.newyorker.com/reporting/2008/04/21/080421fa_fact_paumgarten?currentPage=8 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.108.189.40 (talk) 05:01, 31 March 2012 (UTC)


 * This is a big problem for Wikipedia. We want content that we can distribute and anyone can use. Wnt (talk) 17:18, 1 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Maybe this article can be renamed "Nick White" and turn it into an article about the man, rather than just an article about the video. cybersaga (talk) 16:41, 9 October 2012 (UTC)