Talk:Trapper Nelson/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Roh G ??   &middot; &#32; 16:59, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

Nominator:Quadell

Errors/Comments
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 * "Tarzan of the Loxahatchee". citation?
 * The lede doesn't have footnotes, per WP:LEAD. But the same quote is cited to footnote #7 down in the "Settlement on the Loxahatchee" section. – Quadell (talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
 * The reference which is used as "Jupiter Kids History: Trapper Nelson". was dead.
 * Oops, you're right. I've fixed that. – Quadell (talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)
 * as per Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement.240 pounds->.
 * Good point. I've fixed that now. – Quadell (talk) 21:45, 18 August 2011 (UTC)