Talk:Travis Dermott/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look over the next few days. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)


 * Lead needs more on his professional career.✅
 * Probably should link minor ice hockey to timbits hockey. ✅
 * "After being named to the OJHL's 2nd Team All-Stars[11] and Fan Favourite[12] he committed to play for the Erie Otters on May 4, 2013." Comma before ref 12.
 * No need to relink OHL and Erie Otters one paragraph after.✅
 * "before they were ultimately eliminated." By who?✅
 * Link Utica Comets.✅
 * De-link Kapanen's second mention.✅
 * Dash needed for 7-game.✅
 * "However" WP:EDITORIAL.✅
 * Awards and honours section needs the references (Ref.) label for the column of the table.✅

That's about it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  21:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:24, 14 April 2020 (UTC)