Talk:Treehouse of Horror XII/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010   talk  03:08, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

I will review sometime in the next few days. Ruby2010  talk  03:08, 4 March 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Images look good, and the non-free image checks out.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * Images look good, and the non-free image checks out.
 * Images look good, and the non-free image checks out.


 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Just a few minor fixes:
 * Outside Mr. Burns' manor, Smithers is standing on a ladder, tries to put up a small orange bat decoration on a weather vane, when he slips on the ladder. Sentence doesn't quite make sense, fix.
 * Changed the sentence to "Outside Mr. Burns' manor, Smithers is standing on a ladder, trying to put up a small orange bat decoration on a weather vane." and implemented the rest of the original sentence in the next: "He slips on the ladder, grabs on an electric cord... etc".Queenieacoustic (talk) 18:20, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Feeling bad that she has to toss out the Ultrahouse, Marge gives the CPU to her sisters Patty and Selma, which tries to kill itself after hearing Patty's stories about her day at the DMV. Make it more clear that the CPU tries to kill itself.
 * Changed it to "Feeling bad that she has to toss out the Ultrahouse, Marge gives the CPU to her sisters Patty and Selma, whose mundane stories drives the CPU to kill itself".Queenieacoustic (talk) 18:20, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

It was a pleasure to read this article. Just make those two minor fixes above, and I will be happy to pass it for GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days, though I'm sure it will be fixed much sooner. Good work, Ruby2010   talk  17:26, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you, and thanks for taking your time to read the article! I hope the changes I made were for the better and will convince you to pass the article. If not, just tell me what you want changed and I'll get right to it. Au revoir! Queenieacoustic (talk) 18:20, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Passed for GA. Nice work, Ruby2010   talk  18:43, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Wow, that went quick! Reviewed and passed the same day, haha! Thanks for taking your time reviewing this, I wish you the best and good luck! :)Queenieacoustic (talk) 19:03, 4 March 2011 (UTC)