Talk:Treehouse of Horror XXV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Johanna (talk · contribs) 02:41, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

Third on my "to review" list. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 02:41, 8 October 2015 (UTC)

Comments from reviewer

 * In the image's caption, I would expand upon what it depicts?
 * Done &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:28, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Why is the showrunner necessary for the infobox?
 * This seems to be the standard method for Simpsons episodes. See the Featured Articles Lisa the Vegetarian and Homer's Enemy. Even though this is necessarily a season rather than episode detail, some episodes are holdovers from the previous season, such as FA-Class Cape Feare, which was part of the Jean-Reiss season 4 production run but broadcast in David Mirkin's season 5 &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:28, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * That's fine. Johanna  (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:39, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Add more from the production section into the lead.
 * Done (I can add more if more is needed) &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:35, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * You have a duplicate link to Homer in the synopsis.
 * Done &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * "The segment ends with the original version of Homer unsuccessfully trying to photograph a good portrait of the two families together, a direct homage to the short "Family Portrait" from The Tracey Ullman Show." How do we know this?
 * Removed as OR &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * In Production, why is the first paragraph only one sentence long?
 * Paragraphs merged &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * I would sprinkle in the EW ref maybe one more time throughout the para (after the direct quote perhaps)--it just makes things better for appearances.
 * Done &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Duplicate links here include Stanley Kubrick and A Clockwork Orange (film) (from the lead) and Eyes Wide Shut (from the synopsis)
 * Done. As far as I know it is acceptable to have links repeated from the lead and image captions &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Link to "Super Franchise Me" where you say "the previous week's episode."
 * Done (without WP:EGG) &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Are these the only reviews you could find?
 * I can indeed look for more, although it's more about what they say rather than how many we have &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Put in a critical consensus sentence as well as things that critics tended to like and dislike about the episode.
 * Done &#39;&#39;&#39;tAD&#39;&#39;&#39; (talk) 09:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Nice work! Just a few things to fix before I can pass. Johanna (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 04:00, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Good work! I'm satisfied enough to pass now. If you get a chance, could you review one of my Veronica Mars articles up at GAN. If you can't, it's okay. Johanna  (formerly BenLinus1214)talk to me!see my work 23:39, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: