Talk:Trento-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:35, 17 February 2017 (UTC)

Pretty minor stuff from me, this article is in fine shape: Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:11, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
 * mm is used as the primary measurement in the lead, but then inches are used for the Washington Naval Treaty guns, also with the Argie guns
 * Fixed
 * link cruiser and destroyer at first mention
 * Done
 * suggest using o/a in the infobox
 * Done
 * suggest using shp in the infobox
 * Didn't think to look at that when I overhauled the box
 * the max trial speed in the text doesn't match the infobox
 * Good catch
 * suggest "shell dispersion" or similar, it isn't clear what it's referring to until the later sentence
 * Good idea
 * suggest "tighten shell patterns" or similar
 * How about "shell grouping"?
 * worth mentioning that the 12.7 mm guns were actually MGs at first mention and link
 * Done
 * worth adding the oclc for Fioravanzo, Worldcat was down when I went to check.
 * Done
 * images are all ok.
 * Not only doesn't Fioravanzo have an OCLC, it also doesn't have a date - according to Worldcat there appear to be 1960 and 1970 editions.Nigel Ish (talk) 13:04, 19 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Good catch - though I'm only seeing the 1970 edition. Parsecboy (talk) 13:12, 21 February 2017 (UTC)