Talk:Trey Lewis (American football)/GA1

GA Review
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I'll be doing the GA review for this article. It needs a lot of work, but I think we can bring it up to par together. Here are some suggestions for improvement: The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki 311  23:31, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Can anything else be added to his early career? Where was he born? Did he have brothers and sisters? Did he play any other sports growing up or in high school?
 * The lead needs a bit more. I'd say something about his knee injury, as it is a large part of the article.
 * One sentence paragraphs need to be merged with other paragraphs or expanded.
 * References go after punctuation without a space: This is an example,[1] and so is this.[2]
 * It is a relatively short article, so I think two quote boxes is overkill. The second one is short, so IMO it would be better just merged into the text.
 * The quotes need references.
 * "Williams said in an interview with KTKA-49 News in Topeka. KS." - can a link be provided to the interview?
 * Spell out contractions unless they are in a quote. Wouldn't --> would not
 * Combine like references in the ref section using the and format.
 * No pictures? It isn't required for GA status, but it would be nice. Have you checked Flickr?
 * Most of that stuff can be fixed, but I cannot find a picture that can be used here, i've checked everywher, sent emails to the Atlanta Falcons website, and nothing. - - [ The Spooky One ] | [ t c r ] 01:58, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
 * I'm failing the article for lack of progress during the seven day hold period. Good luck with the article in the future! Nikki  311  19:33, 6 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Some of the stuff i wont be able to find a source for, unless there's a way to source a new's program on TV. - - [ The Spooky One ] | [ t c r ] 19:08, 11 July 2008 (UTC)