Talk:Tri-County Mall/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AmericanAir88 (talk · contribs) 18:31, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

I'll take this on. I split issues up into Major and basic. Major are GA criteria based which could be grounds for quick failure or discussion. Basic is usually copy editing and other issues to satisfy the GA criteria. AmericanAir88(talk) 18:31, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

Major issues

 * Copy-violation The detector has shown a match at this. Please address this.
 * That appears to be a false positive for a site that just culls content from Wikipedia, because I definitely wrote it first. Also, many of that site's pages seem to copy verbatim from Wikipedia -- take for instance this article which culls content from an addition made way back in 2008.
 * Nice catch. Seems to just be a directory listing copying the Wiki. AmericanAir88(talk) 17:32, 2 September 2019 (UTC)


 * Reference 46 is dead
 * Wayback didn't save that source, so I swapped it out for another source. Ten Pound Hammer • (What did I screw up now?) 02:16, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
 * Solved. AmericanAir88(talk) 17:31, 2 September 2019 (UTC)

Issues

 * Last sentence in the lead: "The mall is owned by SingHaiyi." should be moved to earlier for clarity
 * Moved.


 * "This closed in late 2009.[43]"
 * Any reason that Krazy City closed? Also, the reference (43) is self published and needs to be improved.
 * I removed the reference to Krazy City since I could find literally no other sources mentioning its closure whatsoever.


 * "The Shillito's store was expanded in late 1962 with the addition of a fourth level, while the store's lowest level became a "basement" store which sold discounted merchandise, similarly to their location in downtown Cincinnati."
 * What is a basement store? Also what location in Cincinnati, another store or mall? Please elaborate
 * Clarified. "Basement store" was just the name of that section of the store.


 * "and a brew pub restaurant"
 * Name?
 * Added.


 * I may be wrong on this one, but isn't Pizza Hut in a mall called "Pizza Hut Express"?
 * Not always. The concept of "Pizza Hut Express" didn't exist yet in 1985.


 * Any more expansion on the vulnerability of the mall in recent days? The lead mentions it so it seems to be an important deal.
 * Added a little bit more.

Thoughts
Very impressive article. Great paraphrasing. Issues are above. AmericanAir88(talk) 02:38, 3 September 2019 (UTC)

✅, Excellent work. <b style="color: blue">AmericanAir88</b>(<b style="color: darkred">talk</b>) 01:09, 4 September 2019 (UTC)